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Post by Kabal on May 1, 2006 23:13:14 GMT -5
I met you long ago, in my time of need, you seemed like a grace of god, But now I see your horns...
You Bastard! You treasonous wretch!
I held trust in you, Like a brother, A comrade, A brother in arms... You shirked it away, Only to manipulate me, once again, I am placed against my family due to my blind loyalty...
You Bastard! You Manipulator!
I am cutting the strings you placed me upon. You threatened my mother, you placed your hands upon her, Her yelp for aid, only one came...
You Bastard! You Demon!
I will keep you at bay, You claim I'm wrapped around your finger, Well I will break it, How dare you try to harm my mother, If only I was strong, if only I was fit, I'd show you justice, By breaking every bone that you hold.
But I know better, you are stronger, a deadly foe... So I shall use another means, you will pay, I swear this truthfully, No one touches my mother and gets away with it...
YOU BASTARD! YOU FOOL!!!!
Never will you be trusted, now will you be able to come near my mother again, your betrayal is not taken lightly, I swear I will carve your name into your place in hell for you!
You Bastard... How could you betray me?!
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Post by The Godess of Destruction on May 8, 2006 17:01:04 GMT -5
(i was thinking where you mad when you write this)
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Post by Kabal on May 9, 2006 18:48:26 GMT -5
Well, I think the writing speaks for itself... You try having a man threaten harm upon your mother with word and forceful prodding, of course anger was used to write this. I was more than Mad, I was consumed with fury, I wanted to kill him, but focused upon venting to keep from doing something I know I would regret... But yes, I was enraged while creating this.
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Post by The Godess of Destruction on May 9, 2006 23:37:46 GMT -5
well i think you make that point clear to me i whant to express my feeling like that but i dont know how
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Post by Kabal on May 11, 2006 1:35:34 GMT -5
lol To express your emotions, you first need to lose the fear of people knowing what you are thinking. Then learn the words that express how you feel... I wouldn't doubt yourself if I were you, you could be a potential Creator of masterpiece.
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Post by The Godess of Destruction on Jul 2, 2006 12:04:57 GMT -5
thank you very much for your advice i will follow i promiss you will be the first person to read my poem.
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Post by Kabal on Jul 8, 2006 10:02:00 GMT -5
(Oops, sorry about my delay ^^;; ) I would be honored to read your work, I only hope my advice actually helps XP no point in taking advice that does no good lmao. And Thank you for your comments ^__^ they are much appreciated *hugs*
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Post by The Godess of Destruction on Jul 9, 2006 4:16:08 GMT -5
hug back is a good advice and to tell you the true i am writing a poem right know in spanish then i will try to translate the poem in english.
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Post by Kabal on Jul 9, 2006 11:20:31 GMT -5
I look forward to reading it...
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