Sailor Star
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Don't you just love me?
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Post by Sailor Star on Dec 25, 2003 23:05:13 GMT -5
You never know what life has in store for you. I had to discover the hard way that love can come and go just as quickly as it came. My name is Siren. I am a High Priestess Summoner from the Planet Luraiann. It's also not easy being a princess of a planet that is hated by mostly everyone. So, half of my life has remained a secret. This is my story. Hopefully; my story hasn't ended yet.
What do u guys think so far?
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Post by Sailor Star on Dec 28, 2003 19:53:27 GMT -5
Someone please read this! Come on. I need some feedback.
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Post by Sailor Jupiter on Dec 28, 2003 20:11:28 GMT -5
Oooh, I think it's good. ;D Keep up the good work!
Hm... maybe I should post up a few of my writings.
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Post by Sailor Star on Dec 28, 2003 20:14:36 GMT -5
Thanks Jane, long time no see! ;D I think u should post some of you writing. I'll read it.
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Post by Sailor Jupiter on Dec 28, 2003 21:23:44 GMT -5
Yep, long time no talk. I've been busy-ish and kinda forgot about this *heh heh HEH* And for posting up writing, I should think of something to write about. I've written a couple of short stories but they're kinda... boring. They're like based on books I've read and modified kinda. Blah, I'll go write something good.
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Post by hawk1 on Dec 29, 2003 23:26:41 GMT -5
it sounds like a great start Star. I'll be waiting in anticipation for the next installment.
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Post by Sailor Star on Dec 30, 2003 0:19:53 GMT -5
Sailor Jupiter: Post it anyway. At least u have one guarunteed fan. ;D I'll always be there to support you stories. Hawk1: Thanks and I'll be sure to let u know when it's up.
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Post by Sailor Jupiter on Dec 30, 2003 9:11:31 GMT -5
Well, I'm gonna start something today, since it's my bday and all and i get to do w/e I want to. ;D
You should write more! Sorry, I'm a big fan of reading and don't exactly like waiting for the next part. ;D
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Post by Sailor Star on Jan 2, 2004 0:49:22 GMT -5
Happy belated b-day Jupiter! Oh just so the audience knows, the introduction starts of in the other Earth on a place called Neo-Sylia. The beginning of the story starts of in the summoners high school in this World. Briinnnnnnnnnngggggggg! Oh thank god. Siren though as she ran out of the gym, heading for her locker. Just six more months of this and I won't have to put on that ugly gym uniform anymore. As she reached her locker she caught a glimse of Neru heading towards his locker. Maybe if I hurry I can catch up with him and have at least one good conversation like we use to. At least before that clingy girlfriend of his came along. She close her locker and walked down the hall (mind you forgeting all about her original plan) with her head down and grumbling, angrily to herself about her luck in love.....to bad she didn't watch where she was going; because she walked straight into him, almost falling back herself. "Who the hel....heck!" She looked up, " Oh Neru.......I'M SO SORRY, I KNOW I CAN BE THE BIGGEST CLUTZ SOMETIMES, ARE YOU OK, I DIDN'T HURT....." Neru, still in shock from her sudden babbling, cut her off, " It's okay, really, you don't have to apologize, here lemme help you up." "So, what's up?" Siren continued to look straight ahead...mainly to keep a look out for his glaring girlfriend who seem to be everywhere he was, " Nothing much, just thinking about...stuff." "Like the dance?" For a second she picture herself going with him, but quickly erased that thought. " No way, I have no one to go with." He looked at her in a strange way, " Then go with your friends......." " THEY HAVE DATES...." "Or go bye yoursel....." " AND I AM NOTgoing by myself, that would be to loser like." " No it wouldn't. Easy for you to say Mr. I have a girl. They both stopped in front of the music room and Siren turned to face him, " Besides I have bigger things to worry about then a stupid Valentines Day dance anyway." He deicided to taunt her, " Oh yeah...like what." She replied without thinking, " Like, if the blessed will grant my an Arilon to summo...." she caught herself. He looked at her questionly. "Uhh...." she laughed nervously, " I got to go see you tomorrow!" Siren dashed out the back door, leaving Neru standing there looking concerned Whew, that was close. I better be more careful about what I say around him...or he might find out who I really am.As she walked down the parking lot she noticed a 3 girls waiting for her. She immediately recongized them when she caught a glimpse of one gold gun on the side of one girl. The tall, silver haird girl slowly approached her. "You ready?" She asked in a straight tone. "Yes, and you should learn how to keep your gun covered...after all this is still a school and we don't want to cause any excitement." As Siren walked over to the girls she failed to notice Neru in the backround, watching her every move..................... I'm leavin' it at that. Don't u love cliff hangers? ;D
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Post by Sailor Jupiter on Jan 3, 2004 12:49:37 GMT -5
OOH. That is so good!! Hehe, keep writing!
Well, like I promised, I started writing so I'm gonna go post it up now.
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Post by Sailor Star on Jan 3, 2004 16:20:03 GMT -5
I'm glad u liked it. ;D I'm gonna read your story right now.
Oh and by the way I'm gonna try to post the character's description as they are introduced.
Name: Siren Kirou Birthdate: October 26, 1988 Sign:Scorpio Hair Color: Midnight Blue Streaks and Black Hair Length: Shoulder length (Normal) Waist Length (in Lurrian form) Hair Type:Straight Height: 5'3" Eye Color: Dark Blue Occupation: Priestess of Ice, High Summoner, Lurrian Princess (High Priestess Summoner) Weapon: Summoner's Staff, Lurrian Sword, Lamp of Ice (looks like a braclet(gold) with a large jewel (dark blue) on it) Magic Type: White Magic
Name: Neru Metsyu Birhdate: November 22, 1986 Sign: Scorpio Hair Color:Blond Hair Length:Shoulder Hair Type: Curly Height:5' 5" Eye Color: blue Occupation: Student, Priest of the Wind, Siren's Guardian Weapon:lamp of wind (jewel color: green),Sword of Light Magic Type:Helper Magic
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Post by Sailor Star on Jan 4, 2004 19:16:33 GMT -5
In this part of the story, I had to write and re-write the entire thing. I even change some dialogue that was said by one character originally to another because I thought it fit better with their personality. So, I have worked really hard on this section and am still kinda not satisfied with this cliff hanger but I'm gonna give it a go anyway. Let me know what yall think now! ;D "Today we have to go to the temple of wind, we have to get areostan asap." Siren blankly stared at the silver haired woman while she continued to babble on and on with her familliar lecture. The woman was wearing a silver and black bodysuit, styled in a half and half matter which seemed to fit her quite well. She also wore dim, orange colored, diamond shaped earings danggling from 2 small silver pearls. To top it all off she practically mastered her black boots with almost stiletto heels. Man I wish I had her figure. Kamikaze then turned to face her, " You only have two arilons and we are way behind shedule." That comment snapped Siren out out of her daydreaming right away. "Sorry Kmaikaze, I promise I will try harder.....maybe we'll be able to pray in two temples instead of the usual one." "HUFF, Kazi, we're not behind anyone's schedule but yours!" This was said by Siren's best frind, Summera. She looked like a beautiful fairy; the kind of girl you'd dream about. Her fair skin is absolutly amazing and her soft blue eyes pull you into her world. Her outfit seemed to say innocent...to the untrained eye even though she was just wearing her navy blue school uniform with white accents and an inflaited bow on the front. She also wore this particular looking braclet which was majorily gold but had a large jewel in it which was a reddish orange color. " Oh shut up Summera, I know what I'm talking about and I know what's best for the summon...." Kamikaze's ranting was cut short by Summera, " Don't worry Siren, you'll get all the alions in no time, then you can go and defeat......" Her voice grew weak and trailled off. For a second it looked as though she were about to cry. Siren, of course, took notice of this and, even though she was about to break down any moment herself, quickly covered it up with a smile. After all, summoners are trained in this as well. She was about to give Summera some words of encouragment when she was suddenly interrupted, "Hey; let's hurry up and get the hell out of this damn parking lot already,we're waisting precious time." The other girls looked stunned for a moment at the girl for she never really talked unless she had to. The girl stared back at the other girls, untill she got even more pissed off and gave them a heavy glare that made them all jump into the car. Feelign triumphantly, she glanced over at the spot where the girls were standing. That's when she noticed this boy starring right at them. They held each other's eyes for a long time........ I'm leaving it at that until next time.
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Post by Sailor Star on Jan 8, 2004 18:46:47 GMT -5
I may not post the next section untill maybe the weekend or the weekend after next because of midterm week. *gaagg* I'll try to post the profiles of the new character's mentioned this weekend. Stay tooned! ;D
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Post by Sailor Jupiter on Jan 8, 2004 19:36:41 GMT -5
Oh, that's good. I can't wait to read the next part. It's a really good story even though I haven't read much. Anyways, can't wait for the next part!
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Post by Sailor Star on Jan 19, 2004 17:02:28 GMT -5
Don't worry Jupiter you won't have to wait to long. As of Thursday I am officially done with midterms since Band and Gym don't have finals. (Thank God) Meaning Thursday and Friday are totally mine to do whatever I want. So, I'll probably post the next section between Thusday and Sunday. That should give me enough time to write edit and rewrite and edit the next part in the story....I already have most of it written out. Stay Tooned. You know you love me.
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