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Post by wiltedflower on Aug 29, 2003 14:35:23 GMT -5
Ok this is a man writing for a woman (inspired by Moulin Rouge) and she dies of consuption in the movie, this is what my poem is describing. It probably would make more sense if you saw the film but it can be read either way. Hope you like it! Satine I never knew your fate, until you flew to the floor. Lying in my sore arms, you told me your last few words. 'Christian tell our story, that way I'll always be with you,' she wispered. I cried myself to sleep, all the hard nights that followed. Hoping to see you there, wanting to see you stand there. 'Christian tell our story, that way I'll always be with you,' it lingered. I forced myself to sit, I stared at my typewriter. My head filled with our thoughts, and our life story appeared. 'Christian tell our story, that way I'll always be with you,' it echoed. I never felt so happy, since the death of my Satine. Our story was complete, a story about our love. 'Satine, my love I told our story,' he smiled.
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Post by Oblivion Sora on Aug 29, 2003 14:45:24 GMT -5
i remember thats poem
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Post by wiltedflower on Aug 29, 2003 17:19:19 GMT -5
REALLY!? Cause I never posted it here and I wrote it so...
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Post by Oblivion Sora on Aug 29, 2003 17:52:05 GMT -5
n/m
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Post by wiltedflower on Aug 29, 2003 21:55:11 GMT -5
lol it's ok! ;D *still love ya*
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Post by Oblivion Sora on Aug 30, 2003 9:53:22 GMT -5
ok
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Post by Oblivion Sora on Aug 30, 2003 9:54:05 GMT -5
i thought it was the poem that chridtian wrote at the end of the movie
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Post by miyu on Dec 23, 2003 9:37:11 GMT -5
nice pome
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