Post by mercury_twilight on May 12, 2003 18:12:25 GMT -5
Okay, I've posted these poems else where and no one will comment on them. Not that I'm trying to force anyone to comment on them here, but I just want to see if anyone likes them....and of course I don't own any of the charcters or other things found in the Harry Potter books
**SPOILER WARNING** I'm posting these assuming those who read them have read all four books that are currently out.
1)Summary: This was inspired by the image in Philosopher's Stone when Harry's sees his parents in the Mirror of Erised and Lily watches sadly as he places his hand on the mirror. These are Lily's thoughts
Rated: G
I Wish, Harry
I wish I could reach out and touch you Harry
Just for a moment, just one hug
I wish I could speak and have you hear me Harry
Just for a moment, to give you my love
It hurts me to think of you growing up Harry
Without our guidence, without our love
It hurts me to think of you wondering Harry
Without us to explain why we watch from above
It scares me to know you're in danger Harry
Hunted by evil, hunted night and day
It scares me to know he's still out there Harry
Hunted by the one who took us away
I wish I could tell you what happened there Harry
Back in that haven, back in that time
I wish I could tell you the things you loved Harry
Back when I use to sing you lullabyes
It hurts me to see you in pain now Harry
Feeling sad, feeling alone
It hurts me to know you fell unloved Harry
Feeling as if you have no where to go
It scares me to know I am helpless Harry
Watching through glass, watching you learn
It scares me to know I can't help you Harry
Watching from a place from which I cannot return
I wish I could be there beside you Harry
Be there to comfort, be there to cure
I wish I could be there right with you Harry
Be there to be who I am, your mother
2)Summary: A student mourning the loss of a friend (this has sparked a story idea as well and it is NOT Cho speaking, it's a student that has yet to be created by me). There is a tense change at the end just to emphasize how hard it is for the speaker to 'let go'
Rated: G
Harry is magic
A wizard unknown to few
But I know another
And he was magic too
Harry is strong
Stronger than even he knew
But I know another
And he was strong too
Harry is brave
His courage is true
But I know another
and he was brave too
Harry is reliable
Never misses his cue
But I know another
And he was reliable too
Harry is fast
Quick of wit and on broom
But I know another
And he was fast too
Harry is smart
Finds out every clue
But I know another
And he was smart too
harry is kind
He has his crew
But I know another
And he was kind too
Harry is curious
Tends to miss curfew
But I know another
And he was curious too
Harry is handsome
His eyes are so blue*
But I know another
And he was handsome too
Harry is loved
By witches and wizards too
But I loved another
Though I don't think he knew
Harry is a savior
Saved all from You-Know-Who
But I knew another
Cedric was my savior too
*I know Harry's eyes are green not blue...but it just fit so well, I'm trying to think of a different line for that part but I haven't found it
I also have a story on my webpage, here is the story url:
www.angelfire.com/realm/fantasywinds/ehlb.html
Title: Extra Homework and Library Books
Summary: Hermione's third year is ending and she has a boyfriend. But as summer comes and goes she's beginning to wonder what her feelings really are
Rated: PG (kissy scenes and strange sensations)
This work is in progress, no one has been reading it so I haven't really been working on it much...should I continue???
**SPOILER WARNING** I'm posting these assuming those who read them have read all four books that are currently out.
1)Summary: This was inspired by the image in Philosopher's Stone when Harry's sees his parents in the Mirror of Erised and Lily watches sadly as he places his hand on the mirror. These are Lily's thoughts
Rated: G
I Wish, Harry
I wish I could reach out and touch you Harry
Just for a moment, just one hug
I wish I could speak and have you hear me Harry
Just for a moment, to give you my love
It hurts me to think of you growing up Harry
Without our guidence, without our love
It hurts me to think of you wondering Harry
Without us to explain why we watch from above
It scares me to know you're in danger Harry
Hunted by evil, hunted night and day
It scares me to know he's still out there Harry
Hunted by the one who took us away
I wish I could tell you what happened there Harry
Back in that haven, back in that time
I wish I could tell you the things you loved Harry
Back when I use to sing you lullabyes
It hurts me to see you in pain now Harry
Feeling sad, feeling alone
It hurts me to know you fell unloved Harry
Feeling as if you have no where to go
It scares me to know I am helpless Harry
Watching through glass, watching you learn
It scares me to know I can't help you Harry
Watching from a place from which I cannot return
I wish I could be there beside you Harry
Be there to comfort, be there to cure
I wish I could be there right with you Harry
Be there to be who I am, your mother
2)Summary: A student mourning the loss of a friend (this has sparked a story idea as well and it is NOT Cho speaking, it's a student that has yet to be created by me). There is a tense change at the end just to emphasize how hard it is for the speaker to 'let go'
Rated: G
Harry is magic
A wizard unknown to few
But I know another
And he was magic too
Harry is strong
Stronger than even he knew
But I know another
And he was strong too
Harry is brave
His courage is true
But I know another
and he was brave too
Harry is reliable
Never misses his cue
But I know another
And he was reliable too
Harry is fast
Quick of wit and on broom
But I know another
And he was fast too
Harry is smart
Finds out every clue
But I know another
And he was smart too
harry is kind
He has his crew
But I know another
And he was kind too
Harry is curious
Tends to miss curfew
But I know another
And he was curious too
Harry is handsome
His eyes are so blue*
But I know another
And he was handsome too
Harry is loved
By witches and wizards too
But I loved another
Though I don't think he knew
Harry is a savior
Saved all from You-Know-Who
But I knew another
Cedric was my savior too
*I know Harry's eyes are green not blue...but it just fit so well, I'm trying to think of a different line for that part but I haven't found it
I also have a story on my webpage, here is the story url:
www.angelfire.com/realm/fantasywinds/ehlb.html
Title: Extra Homework and Library Books
Summary: Hermione's third year is ending and she has a boyfriend. But as summer comes and goes she's beginning to wonder what her feelings really are
Rated: PG (kissy scenes and strange sensations)
This work is in progress, no one has been reading it so I haven't really been working on it much...should I continue???