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Post by MaleMercury on Jan 16, 2005 11:33:53 GMT -5
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Post by D'lo on Jan 16, 2005 19:53:57 GMT -5
The last one's better than the other two, but they all need a lot of work. You need to make the third one more...3Dish. Not actually making it 3D, but putting things in an accurate position with an accurate shape. Then, we can see how far away something is. I'm pointing this to the third one; the odangos look like they're both on the same side of her head. Also, I couldn't see the eclipse.
We'll go one image at a time so that we can improve all of them. Best to worst.
Please don't be offended in any way by my comments. I don't really mean to be mean if I sound that way.
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Post by MaleMercury on Jan 17, 2005 11:16:45 GMT -5
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Post by RAPTOR 9:48 on Mar 26, 2005 9:49:49 GMT -5
not bad, you're showing signs of improvement, I am impressed. but your works are still sideways. when you scan them, havent you tried using the turning tool? the paint program has a rotate function that makes your image turnable, and you could crop much of the blank space. overall, good work. ^_^ you've done well.
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Post by Sailor_In_The_Shadows on Apr 23, 2005 17:41:43 GMT -5
Not to be totaly mean or anything but....I think they need alot of work. SRY SRY!
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Post by LouSMFAN on Apr 28, 2005 16:03:59 GMT -5
Those are pretty good. Not saying they are like a best and they do need work but I am not a FanArt expert so listen to the fanart people around here.
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Post by RAPTOR 9:48 on May 25, 2005 11:05:58 GMT -5
I give criticism for fan art enough in my life. I only drop my 2 cents when needed.
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Post by SuperSailorMercury on May 25, 2005 17:25:07 GMT -5
They are improving. Do you start off with pencil? If you don't, then you should. But if you do, then you should keep practising with it and scan it when it is completley finished.
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Post by LouSMFAN on May 27, 2005 16:03:37 GMT -5
They are improving. Do you start off with pencil? If you don't, then you should. But if you do, then you should keep practising with it and scan it when it is completley finished. Yep, practice makes perfect. |
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