Moon Princess
Sailor Scout
I am Sailor Moon! And in the name of the moon I will punish you!
Posts: 225
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Post by Moon Princess on Dec 30, 2004 10:35:11 GMT -5
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Post by D'lo on Dec 30, 2004 13:53:47 GMT -5
That looks an awful lot like my 13 year old self did that. I drew her like that when I was 13. Keep drawing to get better.
In the odangos... Those lines need to be curved. The wings on the brooches need to be less pointy. You also need to shrink the mid-body in width to match the legs. The neck isn't so wide. Try fixing those and see how great it will look.
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Post by Des on Dec 30, 2004 21:37:03 GMT -5
Boy, what criticism your giving everyone!  I think it looks great anyway! ;D |
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Post by D'lo on Dec 31, 2004 13:46:39 GMT -5
Sorry. I should cut it out...
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Post by pseudonym on Jan 6, 2005 2:23:21 GMT -5
I like the attention to detail on the brooches and collar... I always forgot about those little things! I also really like the way that you draw eyes.
As Fubuki said, the neck is a little wide, though, next time, try drawing the face a little bit bigger, and that sould balance that out. The bust size is very good as well, though you may want to narrow the waist a little... more 'V' shaped, and make the skirt a bit bigger.
The tails of her back bow are drawn nicely... they're almost graceful... fluttery. I like the leg position as well and the proportion was executed nicely here. It does seem as her back leg is further away... and is drawn smaller, but not too small. That is a skill that some people have a hard time grasping, but I think you've got it, which is great!
Do you have anything else to post?
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I think it looks great anyway! ;D 
