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Post by Eternal Moon Sailor on Feb 18, 2005 18:45:10 GMT -5
That is good
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Post by Helena on Feb 22, 2005 18:24:12 GMT -5
Man, is that depressing!  Honestly, your poem has struck a chord in me, Kabal- especially the bit about the brother and sister... I like how you've used the German- very effective. It's so sad |
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Post by Helena on Feb 24, 2005 12:58:02 GMT -5
No problem! ^_^ I studied German for two years at school and I did enjoy it. I'm glad your brother and sister keep you going. My brother has encouraged and supported me when no one else did and for that I am eternally grateful, but he's really ill at the moment and your poem touched me because sometimes I feel really useless. It's hard to see him so weak when he's always been strong for me. I can tell that you put your heart into this poem because I definitely felt something when I read it and I felt pain and love. I don't know if what I said made any sense, but it is beautiful. I usually don't read poetry, but the German attracted me!  |
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