Post by moonprince804 on Oct 4, 2004 19:42:56 GMT -5
This is the story of a mutant man called Scar. He has great powers, but he can't control them. The evil witch Gine (Hard G, e sounds like a long a) put him under a spell where one little touch will make him bleed. So Scar, along with his friends Jodan and Cynthia, both 16, are on a quest to find Gine and destroy her. Hope you like!
*Scar fell down to the ground, bleeding and sweating all over. He just won a battle with Gine's evil cockroach warriors. He was in much pain. With all his strength, he got up. He had trouble standing for a moment, but finally he was able to stand up all on his own. Jodan and Cynthia rushed to his aid. They were about to touch him, but stopped.
''Go ahead,'' panted Scar. ''I'm already bleeding.'' So Jodan and Cynthia put their arms around Scar. Scar bled even more. And so they walked out of the old temple and into the forest. Later that night, Cynthia was tending to Scar's wounds, while Jodan was washing their blood-stained clothes. Jodan gasped in disgust at the clothes.
''This is the part I hate the most,'' said Jodan. ''These clothes reak!''
''Get over it, Jodan!'' Snapped Cynthia.
''Could you also get my back? It's still hurting.'' Said Scar as he pulled off his shirt. Cynthia gasped in disgust. Jodan smirked. That morning, the three were walking through the forest. Suddenly, Scar heard something. He stopped and looked around.
''What is it Scar?'' Asked Cynthia.
''I heard something.'' Answered Scar.
''What?'' Asked Jodan. Scar continued to look around for a few moments, then shook his head.
''Nothing,'' he said. ''Let's go.''
So the three continued walking. Behold the palace of Gine. Slime and bugs covered the walls. Gine was sitting in her throne. Her servant, Torako, appeared before her.
''Have you killed Scar?'' Asked the evil witch.
''No,'' Answered Torako.
''Why?'' Said the repulsive temptress.
''We have underestimated him, my lady,'' answered Torako. ''We need stronger warriors.''
''Shut up!'' Barked the hideous hag. ''Send hundreds of cockroach warriors at him and make sure he dies!''
''Yes, my lady''. Bowed Torako. Back at the forest, the three were still walking. But suddenly, the cockroach warriors surrounded them again.
''Them again!'' Snarled Scar. The cockroach warriors were preparing to attack*
Hope you like it so far! I'll continue it soon.
*Scar fell down to the ground, bleeding and sweating all over. He just won a battle with Gine's evil cockroach warriors. He was in much pain. With all his strength, he got up. He had trouble standing for a moment, but finally he was able to stand up all on his own. Jodan and Cynthia rushed to his aid. They were about to touch him, but stopped.
''Go ahead,'' panted Scar. ''I'm already bleeding.'' So Jodan and Cynthia put their arms around Scar. Scar bled even more. And so they walked out of the old temple and into the forest. Later that night, Cynthia was tending to Scar's wounds, while Jodan was washing their blood-stained clothes. Jodan gasped in disgust at the clothes.
''This is the part I hate the most,'' said Jodan. ''These clothes reak!''
''Get over it, Jodan!'' Snapped Cynthia.
''Could you also get my back? It's still hurting.'' Said Scar as he pulled off his shirt. Cynthia gasped in disgust. Jodan smirked. That morning, the three were walking through the forest. Suddenly, Scar heard something. He stopped and looked around.
''What is it Scar?'' Asked Cynthia.
''I heard something.'' Answered Scar.
''What?'' Asked Jodan. Scar continued to look around for a few moments, then shook his head.
''Nothing,'' he said. ''Let's go.''
So the three continued walking. Behold the palace of Gine. Slime and bugs covered the walls. Gine was sitting in her throne. Her servant, Torako, appeared before her.
''Have you killed Scar?'' Asked the evil witch.
''No,'' Answered Torako.
''Why?'' Said the repulsive temptress.
''We have underestimated him, my lady,'' answered Torako. ''We need stronger warriors.''
''Shut up!'' Barked the hideous hag. ''Send hundreds of cockroach warriors at him and make sure he dies!''
''Yes, my lady''. Bowed Torako. Back at the forest, the three were still walking. But suddenly, the cockroach warriors surrounded them again.
''Them again!'' Snarled Scar. The cockroach warriors were preparing to attack*
Hope you like it so far! I'll continue it soon.
