Satine - A Poem

[wiltedflower]

Ok this is a man writing for a woman (inspired by Moulin Rouge) and she dies of consuption in the movie, this is what my poem is describing. It probably would make more sense if you saw the film but it can be read either way. Hope you like it!

Satine

I never knew your fate,
until you flew to the floor.
Lying in my sore arms,
you told me your last few words.

'Christian tell our story,
that way I'll always be with you,' she wispered.

I cried myself to sleep,
all the hard nights that followed.
Hoping to see you there,
wanting to see you stand there.

'Christian tell our story,
that way I'll always be with you,' it lingered.

I forced myself to sit,
I stared at my typewriter.
My head filled with our thoughts,
and our life story appeared.

'Christian tell our story,
that way I'll always be with you,' it echoed.

I never felt so happy,
since the death of my Satine.
Our story was complete,
a story about our love.

'Satine, my love I told our story,' he smiled.

[Oblivion Sora]

i remember thats poem

[wiltedflower]

starfighter729 said:

i remember thats poem

REALLY!? Cause I never posted it here and I wrote it so...

[Oblivion Sora]

n/m

[wiltedflower]

starfighter729 said:

n/m

lol it's ok! ;D *still love ya*

[Oblivion Sora]

ok

[Oblivion Sora]

i thought it was the poem that chridtian wrote at the end of the movie

[miyu]

nice pome