Untittled (pome)

[MaleMercury]

heres a pome in the view of ami)

Love
It is like a kinfe sliceing my heart into pieces
when i see you
when your stare reaches my face i fell ever so joyful
I promess i will be loyal
don't you know I love you
You may think im above you
but no i love you.

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[D'lo]

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