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Post by Alexa on Aug 28, 2004 8:50:54 GMT -5
Rating= G One morning Hotaru was shaken awake by Michiru. "Hotaru wake up look at this." called Michiru. "Wh-what' uttered Hotaru sleepily. "Someone sent you these flowers" said Michiru. Hotaru, after wiping her eyes stared at Michiru and on her lap was a bunch of flowers addressed to Hotaru. "Are those for me?" whispered Hotaru. Michiru nodded. "A boy dropped them off this morning, his name was Kai, I think he goes to your school. Anyway you should get dressed" said Michiru smiling at Hotaru as she left the room. Hotaru had never got dressed so fast then she rushed off to school. She was unsure of the emotions she was feeling as she entered the school gate. (Please tell me what you think of it so far. I have the rest of it but I will only put it up if you want me too! ;D It's good  ) |
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Post by Alexa on Sept 14, 2004 15:12:55 GMT -5
Anyone wanna reply??
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Moon Princess
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I am Sailor Moon! And in the name of the moon I will punish you!
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Post by Moon Princess on Sept 14, 2004 15:18:21 GMT -5
Its good so far  |
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Post by Alexa on Sept 15, 2004 14:14:32 GMT -5
Thanx!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Cancer_Star
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Few know me for who I truely am, but in the end all shall face me
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Post by Cancer_Star on Sept 29, 2004 21:20:19 GMT -5
I like it, please keep going with it.
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Post by Mercurius on Sept 29, 2004 21:35:18 GMT -5
Yeah it's cool please continue ..... I want to know  |
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Post by Alexa on Oct 2, 2004 11:22:28 GMT -5
CHAPTER 2:
"Mitzuki, Sakura." called the teacher
"Present" called back sakura
Hotaru was in class barely listening to the teacher. She was scanning the room trying to remember who Kai was.
"Tomoe, Hotaru" called the teacher
"Present" called Hotaru
"Tsukashi, Kai" called the teacher
"Present" called a voice right behind Hotaru. She spun around, behind her was a handsome boy with short red hair, topax eyes and freckles. Hotaru quickly turned around blushing.
(That's the end of part 2 folks, send your comments and I'll write more if you want me too.!! ;D
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Cancer_Star
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Few know me for who I truely am, but in the end all shall face me
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Post by Cancer_Star on Oct 4, 2004 0:07:51 GMT -5
Write more.
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Post by chiyomi on Oct 23, 2004 15:48:26 GMT -5
It looks interesting so far. Please continue!
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Post by Alexa on Oct 27, 2004 14:06:42 GMT -5
Part 3
During chemistry Hotaru was paired up with Kai her heart was thumping wildly. She kept dropping test tubes and mixing the wrong chemicals, by the end of the lesson she had caused 3 fires and broken 7 test tubes. As she left the class room she felt an arm on her shoulder "Do you wanna have lunch together?", Hotaru turned around, it was Kai. "Sure." answered Hotaru, a bit too fast.
Outside Hotaru and Kai sat in silence until suddenly "Did you leave the flowers by my door?" said Hotaru going red.
"Yes I did." replied Kai calmly
"Why?" asked Hotaru staring at her feet
" Because you're special Hotaru" smiled Kai. The bell rang , "Oh, I've gotta go, bye! squeaked Hotaru and she ran into class.
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Cancer_Star
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Few know me for who I truely am, but in the end all shall face me
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Post by Cancer_Star on Oct 27, 2004 14:32:47 GMT -5
Your doing really well with your story, Starfire.
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Post by Alexa on Oct 27, 2004 14:45:20 GMT -5
((Thankyou!))
Part 4
The next morning Hotaru ran to school to tell Kai how she felt. She was early, she looked around the class to find Kai, he wasn't there. "Where's Kai?" Hotaru asked one of his friends.
"He's gone"said his friend. He then picked something up from under his desk" He left these for you though" he replied giving her a bouquet of roses with a card. Hotaru read the card. It read:
I am sorry Hotaru My family and I have moved to the countryside. I should have told you how I felt before but I was scared of how you would react. Please forgive me.
Kai
Silent tears streamed down Hotaru's face. " So this is what a broken heart feels like" whispered Hotaru.
(Hey guys that's the end however keep an eye out because I may decide to add more but for now that's the end of 'Saturn Heartache'
P.S. If you like my fan-fic, join my website, I'm posting more up there, but you have to be a member to read it. My site's called 'senshi garden' it's new though so it's not as developed as this one, click the house under my avatar to see it ;D ;D!)
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