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Post by PrinceOfMercury on Feb 6, 2004 23:19:01 GMT -5
The Glow Of [glow=green,2,300]Green part I It was A new moring With everything going great Usagi Was Sleeping in The Run rise was abnormal it was Green... Just Green not any Other Colors Just Green and The Sun in witch that night somthing had come... Somthing Light Or dark...and yet no one really took the time to look at the Sun rise anymore But the would soon change as In the city of Tokyo a Boy About...ermm...9 Was standing ontop of a building puting his feet over the sides watching he was a Red tank top that flaped around in the wind and Blue jeans that wear WAY to big for him his black hair was blowing around in the wind and he had The brightest of Blue eyes and a crystal around his neck That was Pure green you could not see though it nor see your reflection in it As the day would go bye and the boy naver left that building he watched them and lisined to them and learned a little he had a smile that was cute in a boy way he looked sweetjust looking down at them watching...lising...learning mean while usagi was on her way to the comic book store to buy her " Attack of the Evil Smerfs" Comic The boy would then set his blue eyes on usagi and stand up looking at her then hed joump down to who knows where usagi would then go into the park and sit on a bensh reading eating gummy worms "yummy yummy yummy I got candy in my tummy! " she sang it would not make long for Makoto to come along seeing Usagi sitin on a bench reading " Attack of the Evil smerfs" and The boy would be siting in a tree watching Watching...Waiting... About an hour later Makoto would be taking a small run around the park, shed then stop and look over seeing uasgi reading a comic book like Ami and a $100.00 Gift card to " Book Mall" usagi was laughing why she ate a gummy worm and it got cought in her teeth so she lowerd the comic book to see makoto holding in a Huge Laugh whenm with her eyes closed then shed lean over and burst into laughter then looked up seeing a gummy worm stuck to usagis teeh then she sweet droped laughing, Usagi would then pick the gummy worm out of her teeth " you like laughing at everything dont you.." Usagi would say dog earing the page where big bad Smerf was about to call big nice smerf a Name. te sound of makoto laughing would make the boy up from a sleeping sate he would rub some sleeps out of his eyes and look up to see makoto just geting up from laughing the boy would lock his eyes on makoto. Then usagi would pick up her books and go stomping off to the candy store why makoto would keep on her run and run home where the boy would fallow joumping from Building to Building, intill he fallowed her to her house where he would joump ontop of her roof and look up at the sky it now being mid Day makoto would step into the shower and a boyoi (( Yes boyoi not a typo)) has to eat too so he would joump down froom the roof and walk to the back door when he enterd his heart whent to his stomach and he got a little scard you could see it on how the way he moves, hed then move to kitchen (( Cant Spell )) and look for food getin some chips and coke hed then make his way into her living room where he would grab a blanket as he was heading out makoto none for her Extreamly Short showers would walk out of the bathroom just as The boy Joumped under the bed scard to death right now hed watch makotos feet walk over to the dresser and the towl that she was wearing droped and the look on the boys face Was one of the deepest shades of red the only thing he could see was her feet but none the less makoto would put on some cloths (( Thank the above!! )) and walk out the front door grabing her bag hereing the door open and shut the boy would wiggle out and walk into the living room once agien then makoto walk would Back into the door Seting her eyes On the boy, the boy scard to the point where he looked like he was going to wet his pants droped the soda,chips, and blanket and they Looked at each other One sirprized One scard... Lemme Know if I should Make Part II
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Post by Creshosk on Feb 6, 2004 23:46:59 GMT -5
You spelled kitchen right.
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Safire
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"Konton dakishimeru watashi o! Watashi wa ...ni fukushu suru... Sailor Moon!"
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Post by Safire on Feb 7, 2004 0:25:03 GMT -5
PrinceofMercury, "mister anti read" you posted a fan fiction! Awesome! That's great news, now if i can just get you a publisher you will become the next J.R.R. Tolkien! ;D Seriously through great stuff! keep up the good work and remember the grammer is not what is important, it's the story that counts. You may yet learn to actually "like" reading and writing.
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True love is Prince Diamond and Me, Princess Serenity SO back off MY Diamond!!
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Post by DiamondsMoonGrl on May 24, 2004 20:48:48 GMT -5
its really good! keep it up!!
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Post by LouSMFAN on May 24, 2004 20:51:20 GMT -5
Hey the story is pretty good!! Actually one of my favoeites [glow=red,2,300]______________________________ www.yahoo.com
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Post by PrinceOfMercury on May 26, 2004 2:15:36 GMT -5
alright Alright Alright, i'll start it agian for a long time I thought no one was reading it
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Post by PrinceOfMercury on Jul 27, 2004 22:48:08 GMT -5
Part II
They both Stared at each other for one or two moments then the boy looked to both his sides then picked up the soda,chips and blanket and walked out the front door with a sence of clam. makoto clueless to in witch just happend. it could not of bin a ghost... if it was a ghost that ghost just walked out with her soda,chips and baby blanket. makoto walked slowly over to the door and looked outside. the boy gone without anything close to a footstep or shadow. ' no way... no way... ' makoto thought to herslef. she grabed a bag then headed out... all this why back in the park it started to rain, rain a thick rain with almost hail. the windows in some parts of the city geting cracks and small brakes. it would rain till nightfall in witch the scilence was defaning. the sound of thunder off in the distance and moving back to the city. the moring would have a soaked city with water everywhere and then some. but this moring would start with amy walking slowly to a bookstore, to finsh off her giftcard. half way there the sound of what seemed like thunder hiting the ground with the power to knock out buildings. and indeed the sound of a building falling over making a large dust cloud cover some streets with dirt and dust. the dust cleared with a the image of a small boy the size of the one in makotos house this one with a brown tunic, the headpeace down flaping around in the wind. the boys hair a blond color. but on his back eas an item hard to make out from afar. but with yet anouther dust wave making amy cover her eyes, when the dust cleared the boy was gone... ' weird... must of just bin... me... ' the thought of how the building fell almost didant cross her head. she was post to meet up with makoto at a smoothy shop and yet she did. ami walked in and sat down at a table near the window. almost as she opened her book a hand was placed on her shoulder, ami looked over to see makoto smileing. makoto sat down in the chair ' hey makoto did you see a the building fall about 10 minuets agow? '' '' no I didant.. a building Fell?! what happend? '' '' I dont know I only got the dust waves '' she said makoto looking at amis hair coverd in dirt '' that must of bin cool... ami I think going so long without anything happening is taking a tole on me... I thought I saw a boy in my house about two nights agow... '' '' wow was it a robber?'' '' i dont know she left out the front door... I think I was dreaming... or seeing things. I guess im not made for normal life'' makoto says with a small laugh After about two hours of talking, talking and more talking ami got up and left for home. Smoothy was a good snack but not lunch. when she got home she found her door open... '' I know I locked the door when I left... '' she walked in to find a boy standing infront of her fridge eating everything in sight '' I must be.. seeing things... but... '' she walked up behind the girl and placewd her hand on his shoulder '' who are you may I ask? '' asked ami the boy joumped when he felt the hand on his shoulder and turned around. '' are you Ami minizuzu? '' ami let out a giggle then looked down on the boy '' yes im Ami minizuzu, who are you? ''
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Post by PrinceOfMercury on Jul 29, 2004 1:35:41 GMT -5
Part III
The boy smiled then took a bite out of an apple. " I'm sent here to Protect you. Arnt you lucky? '' Ami let out a laugh of the thought. '' Protect me? Really? is all that food deadly? '' '' Nope im just really hungry, My name is Kealgso im sent here to protect you and blah blah blah we talk later ok? '' Ami laughed even more then walked into the next room '' The others Should be here soon for the others. I hope there not late'' Ami poped her head into the room '' Others? '' Kealgso looked over closeing the fridge door. '' Yes others what kind of Corn is stuck in your ears? I gotta go meat the others befor they start making more troble. '' he started walking to the front door then run into the living room picking up a Fulll scale power Bow. and three belt quivers, he placed the Bow on his back where to matched almost the full size of Kealgso's body. '' well gotta go later zuzu '' he ran to the front door and ran off. '' protect.. me... from... '' it would be That night when a knock came at litas door. the boy with The bow on his back with the tunic covering his head was at the door along with a large man, more looking like an Elf long ears and Dressed en Pure White. down to his messey air that lightly covered his long ears.'' Maybe she isant here....'' said kealgso, this in a way angred the elf so whats the elf way? he starts walking back then rams the door with his shoulder,the door shatering like class '' you know I was trying not to make a mess of things but nooo you elfs like braking things and busting things down to the da point where everything is busted or where it cant be busted anymore '' he talked has the elf looking figure walked in though the busted door. as kealgso followed '' we could of just simpley... '' the faint sound of lita's footsteps coming. '' uh-oh... what happend to my door?!!'' lita shouted '' we gotta hide Java.."
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Post by PrinceOfMercury on Sept 1, 2004 22:30:33 GMT -5
Part IV
"Hide?! Why would I hide from some stupid girl!" he stalking walking closer to the front door then kealgso grabs him and throws him into a closet then running in himslef and closeing the door " now Shut up java " they stayed quite then the sound of litas Footsteps inside the House " Rrrrr this is not good... I hope they didant steal anything..." she walked over to the closet door then turned and walked into a diffrent room " ... I think shes gone..." Java said in a calm voice " lets get outta here. shes not gonna be happey if she sees us and a broken door... " kealgso put his hand on the door noob and opened the door. " ok shes gone lets go!" Java hit the door with his knee geting his knee stuck in the door " Kealgso! help! " kealgso looked over and laughed " dude... your on your own" kelgso high tailed it out of the house and ran to Ami's house knocking on the door. then the door opened and it was Rei " Why Hello there... you looking for Ami? " not expeting to see rei at Amis house he didant know really what to say other then " huh... yeah wheres ami? " Rei opened the door fully and motioned for him to come in. " Ami?! you here?! " kealgso yelled though out the house then a Voice came from inside the living room " im in here! " kealgso walked into the living room not only seeing Rei and Ami but also Mina. now there was a problem " huh.. Ami can i talk to you ... alone? " Ami got up and walked insdie the kicthen " umm I forget whats your name? " she asked with a giggle " my name is kealgso, and we got a problem with Lita and java..." kealgso put on an ' i didant do it ' face " come on we gotta go see lita " kealgso grabed her hand and started walking out the door " Rei, Mina lets go to litas house! " and befor there was a reponse kealgso had already pulled ami half way to litas house. about mid way ami loked up and says " would you mind letting go of my hand?" Kealgso blushed and let go and started walking even faster stoping in the door way. a rather worryed face came apon kealgsos face as ami looked into the house and laughed seeing a tall elf looking person cleaning up two droken doors. " Holy... Javalin?! doing Work?! " kealgso said laughing then befor javalin could say anything a voice was heard from anuther room " He Better Be Working Or im Coming in there and you know you dont want that!!!! " Kealgso started laughing even harder as javalins ears went down " So... what was that about a little girl Javalin? " he started laughing. then ami walked in and walked into litas kitchen in witch she was drinking Chi tea Very Calmy " I found a new friend... he likes doing things for me. " she smiled as kealgso walks in " ohh ami who is this?! a Boyfriend? " lita laughed " im not her boyfriend! are you her Girlfriend?" and as he finshed he felt a hard slap to the back of his head in which Rei was standing right behind him simileing." You know... you need to learn to keep your mouth shut or bad things happen boy!" the slap had knocked off the top of his tunic revaling two slightly small ears, lowered just like javalins knowing he was in troble. " Are thos earrs?! " minas hand rached out and started rubbing one of the ears as kealgso went into a daze then as soon as mina stoped he came out of his little daze. " whoa.. dont do that! " lita, ami ,rei and mina laughed as kealgso left the room blushing. " soo... who are they? kids? " Mina asked " well one of them Owes me a door.. " then her voice was raised " RIGHT JAVALIN!" then from the other room you could here a " yes ma'am~" with a sigh. " wow I wish I could find a boyfriend who would do that ... " from the other room you could here " shes not my girlfriend! " lita laughed " kealgso showed up in my kichen two days agow. I think there just kids playing around " then when rei looked back they wear both gone, without a sound nor word " there gone?! " rei said with serprize. Meanwhile a Dark Force had Serena Captive in a building. Now there was Three boys. the 3rd about 4'7Ft tall and had a TriDent type looking thing on his back. the tree top tips having Blue Enegry surgeing from tip to tip. he had no shirt on but had some pants on. " so how we gonna get her outta there? " kealgso said with a sigh. " well... we Could do it my way?" kealgso put on a stright face " no we arnt gonna blow it up anthing of that sort..." then the 3rd one took his trident off his back and put the tiped ends into the ground and as that happend a White light Surarounded the Building takeing off all the Walls or all sorts makling it easy to see what was inside. and sure enoufe there was Serena inside Room with two fiures guarding the door " oh great like anyone is going to notic that!" kealgso pulled his bow off his back and loaded an arrow into the Bolt. and as he did that the two guards looked at each other and looked around wonder what the heck had happend, then one of them made a grunt sword and pointed at kealgso. and as he pointed kealgso Fired an Arrow going right into the Figures shpulder, and then the 2nd rigure made a big grunt as what seemed Demons with Soild Armor, swords, Shields, Tridents,bows you name it it was there. the demons had Folded wings and as soon as they got enoufe running speed there wings Fliped out and they starte to fly with Great Speed at the 3 Boys. then the 3rd figure pulled his hand off the Trident in the gorund and pulled a very small pull from his pocket as it lanched out and went into a two sided Trident both sides sparking with Enegry. as wings of his own folded out and he quickly lifted himsloef up from the ground and flew into the on-coming demons. then the javalin put hs hands together and started mumbleing some words. then kealgso loaded a black tiped arrow into the Bolt. right as kealgso had an arrow on the bolt the 3rd figure was already in the middle fighting demons coming from every diefection. thrusting his Trident forward Diceing a Demon then swinging it around killing five more. small lights of all diffrent colors was coming up from the ground below Javalin then with great force through his hands forward was a Large beam of Thunder Flew forward at the oncoming demons killing 12 in one blow. then kealgso fired his black tiped arrow as the beam of enegry lanched to the left of the 3rd boy killing 7 Demons. the bodys fell to the Ground and melted into the Dirt. then there was the batter of the last guard. kealgso loaded a green tiped arrow and fired quicky, the arrow shooting stright though the guard. as soon as that was over with , Late Sailor Mercury,Mars,Venus and Jupiter was running up from behind javalin who was still, in the same spot as when the demons came. kealgso was already walking back when the 3rd boy kindy landed out of the air hiting th ground making a small pit next to Javalin. " What happend here?! it looks like a war went on. Javalin turned around and smiled at Sailor Mercury. " well... umm its Bunnys Fault!" the 3rd looked angred as javalin said the word 'Bunny' then kealgso wals up with Serena in his arms. " We call Him bunny... well i forget but he cant talk.. a demon hit him with an Arrow and he lost his voice... so we just call him bunny.. naver did learn his name" kealgso said as if everything was AOK " Venus ran up from behind Mercury and Mars " What happend To Serena?!!! " kealgso looks at her almost forgeting " Bunny was slacking off and she got cought! I am and Saved her Single handedly!" a Small Thump hit javalin on the back of the head. Bunny had his him with the side of his trident. " we need to sort this out later... here is not a safe place" They all started walking back to Litas House wondering who was these kids and why wear the Souts so fliping late?!
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