Trinity
Chibi Scout
I am as beautiful as the moon's light shining at night on the ocean water.
Posts: 58
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Post by Trinity on Aug 17, 2003 18:59:59 GMT -5
Slipping
I feel the pain I feel your hand I know I am safe From the danger I slip into the darkness
The darkness fades and I feel the battle is over and the danger is gone I slip into the darkness once again.
The darkness fades I manage to open my eyes I see your tear stained face. I don't feel pain anymore I slip once again
The blackness fade I feel you holding my hand "I'm sorry Darien" I say "Sh. Don't speak" he says "I love you" I say "I love you too" he says
He presses his lips softly against mine. I manage to open my eyes once more to see all of my friends and families sadden faces around me
"Cheer up" I say. "I'll always be here" "Don't talk like that" he says He presses his lips against mine again. The last words I hear are "No Serena....." As I slip into the darkness for the last time. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So wat do ya think?
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Post by miyu on Aug 17, 2003 19:03:50 GMT -5
i like it
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Trinity
Chibi Scout
I am as beautiful as the moon's light shining at night on the ocean water.
Posts: 58
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Post by Trinity on Aug 23, 2003 1:36:05 GMT -5
Plz ppl read it. It isn't bad!!!
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Post by Sailor_In_The_Shadows on Jun 26, 2004 20:32:38 GMT -5
I loved that!!
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Post by Eternal Moon Sailor on Jun 26, 2004 20:43:47 GMT -5
COOLIO!!
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Post by hawk1 on Jun 27, 2004 11:37:19 GMT -5
That was kinda sad. Great poem!
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Post by drazenx on Jul 25, 2004 3:48:14 GMT -5
That was good.
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Post by Zyppora on Jul 25, 2004 8:09:19 GMT -5
Sounds like Usagi's dying or something ... pretty strong alright.
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