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Post by hawk1 on Jan 5, 2004 21:31:41 GMT -5
“Where is he?” Trista muttered to herself as she mentally searched for the missing figure that she knew would play a pivotal role in upcoming events…she didn’t know exactly what that role might be. The future is not always clear, even to one with all of her millennia of experience, but she knew he was needed, and soon. First she searched the most likely places… “Earth…no. Mercury…no! Damn it where are you?” Trista was growing concerned. Widening her search she quickly checked planets off of her dwindling list. “Venus…no. Mars…no. Jupiter…no Pluto…! Damn! Where the hell have you run off too!?!” Trista began to pace back and forth getting more and more agitated. Glancing back at the portal she had created to help aid her sight of the universe she thought of the only place he could possibly be. “Show me Luna!” Trista commanded the portal. The portal changed to show pictures of a desolate creator ridden landscape. Trista winced at the sight of the destroyed lunar surface. I hate looking at the Moon…so much was lost…so much…pain. In her mind’s eye the desolate landscape was transformed into roads and byways. Huge monuments sprang up in her memory to play through her mind. The portal continued to gaze at the landscape until it reached the most horrifying sight of all. The Palace of the Silver Millennium was a wreck. Its outer walls were not much better off then rubble. The giant steeple, which had towered over the surrounding countryside, had collapsed into the great hall giving the building an impressive skylight and a breathtaking view of the stars. Even now…with the Imperial Silver Crystal again shinning out its radiant light throughout the universe the air on Luna was thin and wispy, so when Trista finally found him resting in the rubble looking up at the stars she was initially apprehensive. However she soon noticed the white clouds of breath emanating from his nose and mouth in the sub zero temperatures. “So…this is where you’ve been hiding… well I have been listening my friend… you want a purpose? Fine, I’ll give you a purpose again, although I don’t know the consequences this might have as of yet down the line. We all have our own roles to play in destiny.” Trista sighed as she contemplated the course that her life had taken because she answered the call to duty. “Yes.” She whispered to herself as she created a portal to carry the figure to the Gates of Time.
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Post by hawk1 on Jan 5, 2004 21:32:49 GMT -5
Tell me what you guys think? I'm ding to get some feedback! ;D
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Safire
Sailor Scout
Prince of Darkness
"Konton dakishimeru watashi o! Watashi wa ...ni fukushu suru... Sailor Moon!"
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Post by Safire on Jan 5, 2004 22:56:34 GMT -5
::claps loudly:: good show Hawk! keep up the good work from one writer to another! I hope a " Dark time indeed" at least rivals this.. ;D
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Post by wiltedflower on Jan 17, 2004 15:40:48 GMT -5
Yeah I can't wait to read more and with the way you write Hawk... .
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Post by cheerangelmercury on Feb 1, 2004 0:42:19 GMT -5
This story has such a good plot! I think this story will good no matter what u do with it
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Post by wiltedflower on Feb 1, 2004 4:01:10 GMT -5
Hawk... where are you... *looks left and right* I am waiting to hear more, and my impatients is getting testy.
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Post by Suisei on Feb 2, 2004 4:40:38 GMT -5
This story has such a good plot!... I agree, I can't wait to read more of the story. ;D
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Post by hawk1 on Mar 31, 2004 0:02:07 GMT -5
I'm back, I'm going to start working on my stories this upcomming weekend, look for new installments on both of my Sailor Fan-ficts either Sat, or Sun.
Sorry to keep you waiting.
Hawk
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Post by hawk1 on Apr 3, 2004 0:26:44 GMT -5
Samuel fingered the hilt of his sword as he marched across the battlements of the Lunarian fortress Tranquility Base. 'Although calling this decripit wreck of earth and stone a fortress would be doing it a justice it no longer deserves its more of a relic now.' Samuel stepped around a piece of rubble as he glanced out at the men standing around him.Samuel stood on the crumpled ruins of Tranquility Base and sighed. What could these Earth fools be thinking? They have to know that it’s impossible? There’s no way any 80,000 men could ever defeat over 20,000 Hermes soldiers. Why are they doing this…? Samuel sighed and glanced along the length of his line. The 22,000 Hermes soldiers went about their duties with a calm efficency. They all wore white fighting outfits built along a asian style. However each planet had a unique belt and headband which displayed the color and symbol of the planets they respectivly belonged to. Samuel stopped his walk as he came upon an old friend of his dressed in a green outfit he gazed out at the portal and the growing army surrounding it. "So what do you think Jupiter knight?" Jupiter knight glanced over at Samuel before responding. "It should be an easy victory, they lack the nessessary equipment to take this fortress, also despite their numbers they are an army of rabble. They have no chance Moon Knight." Samuel nodded his agreement then sighed. "What a waste, but I suppose we have no choice..." Moon Knight looked over at Jupiter Knight. "Ken, impliment the plan." Ken nodded then turned around and started yelling at the Jupitarian Hermes units. Moon Knight took one last look out at the Portal. 'If only there was another way...' He sighed then turned to his own troops.
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Post by wiltedflower on Apr 3, 2004 10:52:23 GMT -5
::claps hands together:: Continue hawk!
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Post by hawk1 on Jun 13, 2004 0:58:46 GMT -5
The warrior fell through the pink cloud to land in an undignified heap in a pile of dust next to a small crater. Following swiftly behind Sailor Pluto land glacefully and with a flick of her hand straightened out her long flowing green hair. The warrior picked himself up and brushed off his worn white fighting outfit which bore a remarkable resemblance to the outfits worn by the Hermes soldiers. "So...where are we?" Asked the warrior as he took his first look out at his surroundings. Sailor Pluto looked over at the powerful warrior as he checked that his sword was still safely in its sheath over his left shoulder. "We are where you need to be, when you need to be and that is unfortunitly all I can tell you, now, I must go." "That's not fair!" Yelled out the warrior turning back to face Sailor Pluto. "You can't just dump me out here in the middle of nowhere without even the smallest hint of a direction!" Sailor Pluto turned and point to a small speck in the distance. "That is Tranquility Base, go there and begin your destiny Matthew." Matthew turned around to gaze off in the direction that Sailor Pluto had been pointing and saw to his amazment streaks of blue and red which would have looked like fireworks to the untrained eye. Matthew whipped around to tell Sailor Pluto, but she was gone. With a deep sigh Matthew whipped his new sword out of its sheath with a practiced ease and gripped it with both hands in front of him. "Moon Knight Teleport!" On the word teleport Matthew thrust the sword straight up with the point sticking high up above his head. Blue lightening radiated out from the tip and engulfed Matthew, in an instant, he was gone.
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Post by hawk1 on Jun 28, 2004 0:52:35 GMT -5
“Die traitor scum!” Screamed Moon Knight as he whipped his sword from its sheath and in one fluid motion slashing straight through the rebel soldier. Ignoring his screams of pain Moon Knight turned to the left and brought his sword up into a block that only barely saved him. The rebel soldier bellowed out a battle cry as he slashed a horizontal cut that was meant to cut Moon Knight in half. Moon Knight ducked under his opponents strike watching in amusement as a few locks of his short brown hair fell to the blood soaked Lunar surface. Springing from his crouch Moon Knight’s sword pierced through the rebel’s abdomen. Moon Knight twisted the blade left and pulled dragging his Katana through the man’s stomach, tuning out the anguished cries of pain as the enemy soldier fell. Suddenly a piercing cry of anguish sprung over the localized battlefield. “My brother! No!” Moon Knight’s head swung to the right as another rebel charged him sword drawn. Samuel moved to block this headlong rush, but in that instant Moon Knight knew he would never block in time. “Marsian Inferno!” Flame appearing as if from nowhere leapt out and engulfed the rebel negating him as a threat. “Saved your life again Moon Knight.” Said a voice, which held a mocking ring to it; Moon Knight smiled. “Which means you only owe be about a half dozen more, right Mars Knight?” Mars Knight smiled back, resting his sword upon his shoulder as he turned to survey the fighting which was steadily moving back towards the Portals. “You’re opening salvo definitely did break their moral. If you can continue this push I will only sing your praises in my report to the Queen.” Moon Knight glanced left at this new arrival. “Sailor Saturn, you honor us with your presence. I was not aware you were going to be participating in the battle today.” Sailor Saturn looked over the battlefield once more before turning to face Moon Knight. “I’m not, I’m merely here as an observer; the eyes and ears of King Endymion and Queen Serenity.” She did a double take upon noticing Mars Knight. “Oh, Mars Knight I hadn’t noticed you. How do you think this battle is faring?” Mars Knight wiped to gore off of his sword and sheathed it before answering. “Moon Knight’s plan was brilliantly orchestrated. The enemy charged straight in and we sent in my planet’s Hermes regiment to pop up right in front of them. The death toll when we opened up on them must have been catastrophic. We then executed a flanking maneuver with Mercury, and Venus’ Hermes Regiments, and as you can see.” Said Mars Knight waving his arms across the war stained lunar soil. “The enemy is on the run.” Sailor Saturn looked back at the hard fought battle. Why, oh why does his sureness and attitude not reassure me? Something bad is going to happen here I just know it…yes, this battle is definitely not over yet.
“Lord Onyx! Lord Onyx!” Yelled a runner as he scrambled into the shadowed command tent pitched next to the bright shining Lunar Portal. Inside the tent there was a figure sitting upon a small throne. The messenger slowed as he fearfully entered the tent to present his message. “L-Lord Onyx… sir! A-a message from-from the front sir.” The figures in the tent didn’t stir, which redoubled the severity of the man’s already terrorized condition. “Well…m-my…l-lord. They, they’ve broken through Lord…they…they’re almost here.” The figure on the throne snapped the fingers on his left hand and the last thing the poor messenger ever saw was the figure on the left raising its hand out palm forward. Then everything went black. For a few moments everything was still inside the tent as the sounds of a desperate last stand filled the air around it.
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Post by wiltedflower on Jun 29, 2004 0:42:08 GMT -5
Yeah, your back! ;D That line had me laughing, 'die', 'traitor', and 'scum' remind me of Star Wars, together it was quite entertaining. I love your writing style! I also love the way this story is moving along; can't wait for more installments. This time don't keep me waiting... as long .
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Post by hawk1 on Jun 29, 2004 0:51:57 GMT -5
Hmm...do you think I should put a dissclaimer up about the battlescenes?
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Post by wiltedflower on Jun 29, 2004 1:05:26 GMT -5
I personally would. I like to give those who deserve the credit; the credit. I have a special place on each of my fan fictions where ALL the disclaimers go. But in the end it's your personal choice.
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