Post by mercury_twilight on May 12, 2003 17:36:48 GMT -5
Okay, this is my first post, other than my introduction. I love criticism/comments etc. So comment away!! It helps my motivation for writing.
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I'll start with my newest one (and the one I'm really proud of), it's free verse, so ya. it's from sailor moons point of view:
Dark
The sky is dark
Where is the moon?
Lost? Gone?
Once my home
Now a holder of memories
I wish I had more
Of its history
The school is dark
Where is Ami?
Lost? Gone?
Once Mercury's princess
Now still my friend and protector
I wish I had more
Of her knowledge
The temple is dark
Where is Rei?
Lost? Gone?
Once Mars's princess
Now still my friend and protector
I wish I had more
Of her soul
The arcade is dark
Where is Makoto?
Lost? Gone?
Once Jupiter's princess
Now still my friend and protector
I wish I had more
Of her strength
The cafe is dark
Where is Minako?
Lost? Gone?
Once Venus's princess
Now still my friend and protector
I wish I had more
Of her leadership
The road is dark
Where is Haruka?
Lost? Gone?
Once Uranus's princess
Now an uncertain friend
I wish I had more
Of her courage
The pool is dark
Where is Michiru?
Lost? Gone?
Once Neptune's princess
Now a friend and ally
I wish I had more
Of her passion
The future is dark
Where is Setsuna?
Lost? Gone?
Once Pluto's princess
Now the guardian of Time
I wish I had more
Of her wisdom
The crib is dark
Where is Hotaru?
Lost? Gone?
Once Saturn's princess
Now a friend and survivor
I wish I had more
Of her will
The com-room is dark
Where is Luna and Artemis?
Lost? Gone?
Once royal advisors
Now still loyal friends
I wish I had more
Of their patience
The house is dark
Where is Chibi-Usa?
Lost? Gone?
Once a future princess
Now still my child and friend
I wish I had more
Of her innocence
The heart is dark
Where is Mamoru?
Lost? Gone?
Once Earth's prince
Now still my protector and lover
I wish I had more
Of his tenderness
The world is dark
Where am I?
Lost? Gone?
Once Moon's princess
Now a protector of love and justice
I wish I had more
Of the answers
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I'm only going to put one more. It's from Usagi's point of view when she see's Mamoru while under Queen Beryl's spell (in the anime he walks away from her into a black hole back to the Negaverse) So ya here it is:
Desperate
With desperate arms
She reaches for him
As he walks away
Her tear stained face
Reveals her thoughts
Memories of yesturday
With desperate ears
She listens for
A hint of who he was
But the voice she hears
That comes from him
Is not the one she loves
With desperate lips
She cries his name
Longing for his touch
A single look
Is all she hopes
But hardly gets as much
With desperate eyes
She watches for
A glimmer of recognition
But the emptiness
She sees in him
Keeps her on her mission
With desperate heart
She remains hopeful
That one day this will end
She'll save him from
The darkness that
He has fallen in
Okay that's it for now. If some people like these I'll post my others (I think I only have two more, but that may change) So ya, what do you think?
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I'll start with my newest one (and the one I'm really proud of), it's free verse, so ya. it's from sailor moons point of view:
Dark
The sky is dark
Where is the moon?
Lost? Gone?
Once my home
Now a holder of memories
I wish I had more
Of its history
The school is dark
Where is Ami?
Lost? Gone?
Once Mercury's princess
Now still my friend and protector
I wish I had more
Of her knowledge
The temple is dark
Where is Rei?
Lost? Gone?
Once Mars's princess
Now still my friend and protector
I wish I had more
Of her soul
The arcade is dark
Where is Makoto?
Lost? Gone?
Once Jupiter's princess
Now still my friend and protector
I wish I had more
Of her strength
The cafe is dark
Where is Minako?
Lost? Gone?
Once Venus's princess
Now still my friend and protector
I wish I had more
Of her leadership
The road is dark
Where is Haruka?
Lost? Gone?
Once Uranus's princess
Now an uncertain friend
I wish I had more
Of her courage
The pool is dark
Where is Michiru?
Lost? Gone?
Once Neptune's princess
Now a friend and ally
I wish I had more
Of her passion
The future is dark
Where is Setsuna?
Lost? Gone?
Once Pluto's princess
Now the guardian of Time
I wish I had more
Of her wisdom
The crib is dark
Where is Hotaru?
Lost? Gone?
Once Saturn's princess
Now a friend and survivor
I wish I had more
Of her will
The com-room is dark
Where is Luna and Artemis?
Lost? Gone?
Once royal advisors
Now still loyal friends
I wish I had more
Of their patience
The house is dark
Where is Chibi-Usa?
Lost? Gone?
Once a future princess
Now still my child and friend
I wish I had more
Of her innocence
The heart is dark
Where is Mamoru?
Lost? Gone?
Once Earth's prince
Now still my protector and lover
I wish I had more
Of his tenderness
The world is dark
Where am I?
Lost? Gone?
Once Moon's princess
Now a protector of love and justice
I wish I had more
Of the answers
*************
I'm only going to put one more. It's from Usagi's point of view when she see's Mamoru while under Queen Beryl's spell (in the anime he walks away from her into a black hole back to the Negaverse) So ya here it is:
Desperate
With desperate arms
She reaches for him
As he walks away
Her tear stained face
Reveals her thoughts
Memories of yesturday
With desperate ears
She listens for
A hint of who he was
But the voice she hears
That comes from him
Is not the one she loves
With desperate lips
She cries his name
Longing for his touch
A single look
Is all she hopes
But hardly gets as much
With desperate eyes
She watches for
A glimmer of recognition
But the emptiness
She sees in him
Keeps her on her mission
With desperate heart
She remains hopeful
That one day this will end
She'll save him from
The darkness that
He has fallen in
Okay that's it for now. If some people like these I'll post my others (I think I only have two more, but that may change) So ya, what do you think?
