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Post by yumecosmos on Feb 28, 2006 20:28:44 GMT -5
Not bad. "Death Star Strike" does have a certain ring to it, in spite of its Star Wars connotations. However, the words "strike" and "blast" are both highly overused in fan attacks. I wouldn't classify poison as something that falls in Saturn's domain of influence. Saturn has plenty of elements to work with in ruin, silence, and birth. I say leave poison to another senshi ^_~ I don't think you really need the "Saturn" in there though. The majority of the senshi's attacks don't use their planet name. The outer senshi, in particular, do not use their planets' names in any of their attacks. Besides, it tends to sound better if you limit yourself to two or three words (Silver Moon Crystal Power Therapy Kiss notwithstanding.)
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